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PostSubject: My note book is outpouring   Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:16 pm

(A visit by the rushingwaters)


Sweeping through the leafy
woods


Surrounded by singing birds
and lively herbs


Without a sense of birth

I realized myself on the bank
of the rushing waters


Unlike the other side

Things were vivid, as I stood
not firmly


But I refused to listen to
the rushing waters


Thou, which seemed to be
telling me many things


As I watched in silence

Listening to her many voices

I knew that I wasn’t the
first person


And knew I very well not to
be her last visitor


She told me many phenomenon
of her beauty


She told me how dry leaves
smiled away


But into prosperity

Finding pleasure with the
morning breeze


And the oxygen of Mother
Nature on her silky soft jelly skin


As she blew lovely kisses of
smiles to the rising sun


But I forgot to remember all
that she was saying


Wasn’t I also told of some of
these dry leaves?


Those which ran into stunting
riverbank rocks


And leaving no trace of their
existence


Neither being remembered by
the depth of her beauty


But being relinquished into
the anguish of many that vanquished?


She told me in another mellow
voice


How lovely dragonflies were
murdered in her astounding beauty


And why fresh plants didn’t
flow till the end of her beauty


In another voice I heard her
say, but this time very horrifically


How the sun was at times
hunting her beauty -


This which left many of her
beloved into unending calamities of grief.


As I looked into her
glittering wet blue eyes


I knew that she was telling
me truths of many things


Those which were very hard to
understand


I understood everything; only
to forget


Yet I felt that she was
talking directly, but to me


I then looked over my mounted
shoulder in pretense


And saw many others exactly
like me


It was then that I realized
that I wasn’t me


But just a withering leaf

About to go on its own

Far away from its mother –
tree


And now into the world of the
rushing waters


The waters of rushing
creatures


The waters many like me would
be afraid of


By knowing that which she had
told me – I told myself


I could reach the end of her
beauty;


Without knocking ‘gainst the rocks of the river banks

Without drowning into the
depth of her chilly beauty


Bu flowing upon her beautiful
silky skin


I then knew that my visit to
the rushing waters


Was not in vain

But for a purpose

-McNeal 1998
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PostSubject: Re: My note book is outpouring   Mon Jun 09, 2008 6:02 pm

i like your writings McNeal.
please honor us with more

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?

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