McNeal

 Number of posts: 138 Age: 32 Location: Monrovia, Liberia Say Whatever: The opposing wind, like a kite, will take me higher My Mood:  Points: 15 Registration date: 2008-05-01
 | Subject: My note book is outpouring Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:16 pm | |
| (A visit by the rushingwaters)
Sweeping through the leafy woods
Surrounded by singing birds and lively herbs
Without a sense of birth
I realized myself on the bank of the rushing waters
Unlike the other side
Things were vivid, as I stood not firmly
But I refused to listen to the rushing waters
Thou, which seemed to be telling me many things
As I watched in silence
Listening to her many voices
I knew that I wasn’t the first person
And knew I very well not to be her last visitor
She told me many phenomenon of her beauty
She told me how dry leaves smiled away
But into prosperity
Finding pleasure with the morning breeze
And the oxygen of Mother Nature on her silky soft jelly skin
As she blew lovely kisses of smiles to the rising sun
But I forgot to remember all that she was saying
Wasn’t I also told of some of these dry leaves?
Those which ran into stunting riverbank rocks
And leaving no trace of their existence
Neither being remembered by the depth of her beauty
But being relinquished into the anguish of many that vanquished?
She told me in another mellow voice
How lovely dragonflies were murdered in her astounding beauty
And why fresh plants didn’t flow till the end of her beauty
In another voice I heard her say, but this time very horrifically
How the sun was at times hunting her beauty -
This which left many of her beloved into unending calamities of grief.
As I looked into her glittering wet blue eyes
I knew that she was telling me truths of many things
Those which were very hard to understand
I understood everything; only to forget
Yet I felt that she was talking directly, but to me
I then looked over my mounted shoulder in pretense
And saw many others exactly like me
It was then that I realized that I wasn’t me
But just a withering leaf
About to go on its own
Far away from its mother – tree
And now into the world of the rushing waters
The waters of rushing creatures
The waters many like me would be afraid of
By knowing that which she had told me – I told myself
I could reach the end of her beauty;
Without knocking ‘gainst the rocks of the river banks
Without drowning into the depth of her chilly beauty
Bu flowing upon her beautiful silky skin
I then knew that my visit to the rushing waters
Was not in vain
But for a purpose
-McNeal 1998 |
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candygirl Admin

 Number of posts: 5911 Location: Monrovia, Liberia Say Whatever: Laughter is the best medicine My Mood:  Points: 2226 Registration date: 2008-03-31
 | Subject: Re: My note book is outpouring Mon Jun 09, 2008 6:02 pm | |
| i like your writings McNeal. please honor us with more _________________ For how can love attain true appreciation if it has never weathered tribulation? ~MHK
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