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Jcliff
we want MORE MORE!!

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

jclifden wrote:

wettin u waitin for

haha.. for her own of poem she say she was writing ....

_________________
For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

jclifden wrote:

wettin u waitin for

yor ma sit down there... th_mrgreen

I will try though---->

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The More I Know....The More I Know I Need To Know"

HB, JCliff, Krazzy, NICA....
your please hook us up with some of your good stuff.
Krazy oh..

_________________
For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

Morning all. Shocked

A Woman's Place
MHk

Is it really such a funny thing
to honorably regard my man as king?
Am I just a vintage old school fool
for willingly submitting to his loving rule?

Is not placing his needs before my own
a virtuously fertile seed to be sown?
For when his loving heart securely trusts in me
will he not acquiesce to my every plea?

Is it not apropos to make sure that my home
is always a fragrant, peaceful abode,
to which he can escape the madness of the streets
and abide in blissful tranquility…with me?

It’s really not such a funny supposition
If you consider God’s scriptural definition.
Clearly it is written in His indisputable word,
“Wives submit to your husbands as to the Lord.”

He in turn laid way for our reciprocity
by issuing to all men the divine decree
to love us as Christ so loved the church,
leaving father and mother to place us first.

I think I’ll pass on this particular jest.
She who laughs last may not always laugh best.
For when I glimpse God’s grace in my beloved’s face
I Know that within a man’s heart, lies a woman’s’ true place.

nica, this one is great. have one that is just the opposite...and saw one with similar theme like yours. maybe we can post by themes; it wil be interesting to see the different perspectives. :D smile_approve

Nica wrote:

Morning all. Shocked

A Woman's Place
MHk

Is it really such a funny thing
to honorably regard my man as king?
Am I just a vintage old school fool
for willingly submitting to his loving rule?

Is not placing his needs before my own
a virtuously fertile seed to be sown?
For when his loving heart securely trusts in me
will he not acquiesce to my every plea?

Is it not apropos to make sure that my home
is always a fragrant, peaceful abode,
to which he can escape the madness of the streets
and abide in blissful tranquility…with me?

It’s really not such a funny supposition
If you consider God’s scriptural definition.
Clearly it is written in His indisputable word,
“Wives submit to your husbands as to the Lord.”

He in turn laid way for our reciprocity
by issuing to all men the divine decree
to love us as Christ so loved the church,
leaving father and mother to place us first.

I think I’ll pass on this particular jest.
She who laughs last may not always laugh best.
For when I glimpse God’s grace in my beloved’s face
I Know that within a man’s heart, lies a woman’s’ true place.

hmmm...

Nica wrote:

Untitled Script based on Wanton Pleasure

Subtitled: luxury

you play a piano

on my soul

with

your

saturday night- just-made-love eyes

compact chocolate body, smooth, sexy and satiating

inspiring intellect

leading me to places i thought

existed

but never dared go

drawing ecstasy from all of its hidden escapes

screams and moans, logical language

silence even clearer

you make music for my heart

you are luxury

-------krazzy

Number of posts: 589 Age: 89 My Mood: Points: 155 Registration date: 2008-04-10

K, this is so so true!

leading me to places i thought

existed

but never dared go

i did not see this!!!! love it.

candygirl wrote:

how can one describe the feeling that overcomes you at that moment?
the moment you are handed that lil bundle....?

love
fear
anxiety
love
wonder

a lil bundle,
wrapped
pink nose
pinched eyes
pursed lips

mine?
what do i do?
what if he cries?
wha if he wont eat?
mine?

i am a new mom
love at first sight
indescribable love
mothers love

i am a new mom

~Candy

Untitled Script based on Hilarious Indignation

Subtitled: Your Love is Not Mine

no… it is not payback time

I am broke, totally out of emotional cash for you

i painfully removed the luxurious power and control

you had over my body

and returned them to me

i finally recognized my choices and needs

you gave me all that you could

but even solitary gratification aka masturbation beats your mark

my body ached, hurting my mind

in anticipation of your whatever-making

not knowing your pace or needs or emotions

you see, mine did not matter

your satisfaction was forced in me

my orgasm, a reluctant smile

sometimes a shivering betrayal of the foolish demands on me, a woman

to symbolize the non-existent emptiness i hold

o you justify, i am soliciting for what I own

but why do you want me so?

you infuriate the followers of christ

in coveting your neighbor’s prized possessions

my emotions like yours

do not adhere to the terms of the contract

but you set typical male double standards

you want me to exorcise this physical urge

that attacks your groin and screams my name

but you cannot love me

i am soliciting and you don’t buy

what is love, i ask? The feelings I transfer to your body, your heart

comes from mine, from my heart

not a torn unsigned marriage certificate

your feedback leaves me hungry for the impossible

you respond with hurt

rejection

was this not about love?

i laugh through your bullshit which is unable to shift

the stance of my Guinness laced bravado

the one that makes me to add sound to my thoughts

and say i do not like that love you gave me

it is transient and ultra intellectual

too sophisticated

it cannot reach my fiery soul, my hard-earned laughter

and my sweet tears

i do not want that love you give me or you make or whatever

it is so brisk like a frosty monday morning

stealing the languorous laze

of a weekend.

my spirit wakes up at noon

and it wakes up for me!

reeveswilliams

6/26/2007 2:41:42 PM

so our GURU poets... when can we have a day for your to do some nice friendly sweet sparring??
krazzy, Nica, HB, Jcliff??
your please hook us up.. th_boogie

_________________
For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

looka?

candygirl wrote:

so our GURU poets... when can we have a day for your to do some nice friendly sweet sparring??
krazzy, Nica, HB, Jcliff??
your please hook us up.. th_boogie

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