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Nica
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:47 pm | |
| | candygirl wrote: | sommor us aint knwo how to write poetry oh.... your makin us jealous..
\but i am enjoying your though.. keep it coming... |
For true...wha kinna bluffing business dat. But I enjoyng him too. |
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candygirl
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:52 pm | |
| | Nica wrote: | | candygirl wrote: | sommor us aint knwo how to write poetry oh.... your makin us jealous..
\but i am enjoying your though.. keep it coming... |
For true...wha kinna bluffing business dat. But I enjoyng him too. |
HAHA.. PEKIN SHOWNG US HE GOT RAP.. I COMING START WRITING MY OWN TOO .. WHAT HAPPEN NAH.. I WANT BE EXPRESSIVE LIKE YOUR.
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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
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candygirl
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| | Subject: A new mom Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:56 pm | |
|  how can one describe the feeling that overcomes you at that moment? the moment you are handed that lil bundle....? love fear anxiety love wonder a lil bundle, wrapped pink nose pinched eyes pursed lips mine? what do i do? what if he cries? wha if he wont eat? mine? i am a new mom love at first sight indescribable love mothers love i am a new mom ~Candy
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For how can love attain true appreciation
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~MHK
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Edina
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 5:05 pm | |
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candygirl
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 5:07 pm | |
| | Nica wrote: | Blink
MHK
In the blink of an eye
a world can change.
In the blink of an eye
it’s oh so strange.
What we thought to be real
can suddenly disappear.
What we thought was so confusing
suddenly becomes clear.
So live your life each and every day
as if there were no tomorrow.
Use laughter as a weapon
to drive away someone’s sorrow.
Make sure that the ones you love
know exactly how you feel.
Do all of these things quickly
because time makes no deals.
And the blink of an eye
leaves little time for goodbye.
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very very nice Nica.. i like
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candygirl
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 5:08 pm | |
| | Edina wrote: | | New mom --- I like. |
morning Lady E
you like? hmm.. sommor us dont know how to write poetry oh... we just trying our hands... 
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Geyla Queen
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 6:34 pm | |
| | candygirl wrote: | how can one describe the feeling that overcomes you at that moment? the moment you are handed that lil bundle....? love fear anxiety love wonder a lil bundle, wrapped pink nose pinched eyes pursed lips mine? what do i do? what if he cries? wha if he wont eat? mine? i am a new mom love at first sight indescribable love mothers love i am a new mom ~Candy
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Awww, you did well  I coming write my own too, your just wait 
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candygirl
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 6:51 pm | |
| hmmm.. my mouth say i writin peotry you girl.. i coming post one other one i wrote
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candygirl
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:25 pm | |
| working mom
loving mom
busy mom
tired mom
always balancing
always juggling
always catching up
pacifying,
cajoling
bribing
to eat your cake and have it
is that such a bad thing?
hard thing?
impossible thing?
balancing family
demanding husband
whinnning child
complaining family "we dont see you"
i want my "Me" time
quiet time
pondering time
i want the nine yards
family
career
good rep
can i eat my cake and have it?
i want it
but
i am a working mom
working wife
busy daughter
can i eat my cake and still have it?
Yes, i can.
~Candy
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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK
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HB***
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 8:29 pm | |
| ....there you go...you just have to bring the feeing...that's a really good start... |
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candygirl
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Nica
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:23 pm | |
| | candygirl wrote: |
how can one describe the feeling that overcomes you at that moment? the moment you are handed that lil bundle....? love fear anxiety love wonder a lil bundle, wrapped pink nose pinched eyes pursed lips mine? what do i do? what if he cries? wha if he wont eat? mine? i am a new mom love at first sight indescribable love mothers love i am a new mom ~Candy
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Beautiful expression Candy!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Nica
Number of posts: 1026
Age: 51
Location: Nashville
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:25 pm | |
| | candygirl wrote: | working mom
loving mom
busy mom
tired mom
always balancing
always juggling
always catching up
pacifying,
cajoling
bribing
to eat your cake and have it
is that such a bad thing?
hard thing?
impossible thing?
balancing family
demanding husband
whinnning child
complaining family "we dont see you"
i want my "Me" time
quiet time
pondering time
i want the nine yards
family
career
good rep
can i eat my cake and have it?
i want it
but
i am a working mom
working wife
busy daughter
can i eat my cake and still have it?
Yes, i can.
~Candy
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Aye yah. Da wha I talking bout. You na get hooked. Yes you can.
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candygirl
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:38 pm | |
|  i learnign small small.. that your the one inspired me.. hehehehe
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Geyla Queen
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| | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:55 pm | |
|  <---I still thinking
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