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Nica

 Number of posts: 1026 Age: 51 Location: Nashville Say Whatever: Yes We Did! My Mood:  Points: 663 Registration date: 2008-04-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 4:22 am | |
| My old pops was a missionary in liberia for more than 25 yers. He is 72 now and retired but stilll active there and is there at least once every year for UMC Annual Conference. I wrote this poem with him in heart. I never appreciated that missionary word when I wa small geh. It always had negative connotations. But I came to understand what it really means by living it and experiencing it from different perspectives. This is my perspective.
The Missionary’s Position Monica Horton-Knuckles
The missionary’s position is peculiar in deed devotedly hovering over the beloved souls, for which salvation is deemed in need.
Methodical is the leverage that penetrates deep within the indigenous core to uproot and eradicate divergent ancestral beliefs.
For such might hinder the soul’s edification and ultimately forestall its divinely socio-economic elevation.
Precarious is the balance of the mindset of Christ in fulfilling the intended mission without the essence of the soul being sacrificed.
Inevitable is the germination of seeds of liberation. Yet caution and clarification must be exercised as said same seeds often birth tumult in a nation.
For there is no more heartrending nor ambiguous a position than that of the lover of souls…forced to leave the beloved behind in the precautionary commission of evacuating a mission. |
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Sugar

 Number of posts: 296 My Mood:  Points: 120 Registration date: 2008-04-03
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:15 am | |
| Lemme come post my unna poem I wrote waaayy back in 1995 |
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Sugar

 Number of posts: 296 My Mood:  Points: 120 Registration date: 2008-04-03
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:29 am | |
| OUR LOVE Our love is unique It's not strong, it's not weak When we first met Nothing was really said We just looked at each other With a continuous stare........ Our love took us by surprise You can't deny feeling the vibes Our love is different Sometimes we're hesitant Often times we're resistant Our love is bittersweet Which makes my heart skip a beat Our love is tragic It could use some magic What will become of our love? It's losing its spark But even if it enters the dark There's one thing that'll always be true And that is "Je t'aime" which means I LOVE YOU!!!! |
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McNeal

 Number of posts: 138 Age: 32 Location: Monrovia, Liberia Say Whatever: The opposing wind, like a kite, will take me higher My Mood:  Points: 15 Registration date: 2008-05-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:05 am | |
| | Nica wrote: | | McNeal wrote: | I wrestle against myself
I tried turning away from myself But saw me looking at myself I tried taking away the old stuffs off my shelf But knew it was a wrestle against myself
How could I remove my ancient sleeve, And put me on a new amour of serenity? How could I change when I don’t even believe? And then wrestle against my own integrity?
I cried out aloud from within Only to put all that I feel out Looking unto a future so thin I still hope to wrestle me out Wrestle against my failures, Wrestle against my ado, Wrestle against my future, I verge to wrestle against my ego
McNeal 1998/99 |
Quite poingant and apropos is your intimate peep at a humanly commom battle, to put the self or me to death...to wrestle it out. Scripture says we are to...put away the former and be of a renewed mind. It is in turning away that we truly find ourselves looking at ourselves.
But if we are not wrestling the things we find, the failures, the egos, the flesh.. then we are in a complacent place, a place of no growth.
You alright my chile. My son in Monrovia Oh! (you old enough to remember da one sef?) |
Michel Dallaire was the first one to make me face myself, now you are the second to read my head letters by punctuation.
I hope I am improving.... I do admire your work and it had me spell bound.
You ma big sister in progress  |
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Nica

 Number of posts: 1026 Age: 51 Location: Nashville Say Whatever: Yes We Did! My Mood:  Points: 663 Registration date: 2008-04-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:13 am | |
| Honing the craft, the techniques of writing is something we can all learn. It is a growth process. But a masterful delivery of content that has the ablitity to move, to incite, to engender empathy...that is a gift... one I believe you possess. You are a diamond in the rough. |
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Nica

 Number of posts: 1026 Age: 51 Location: Nashville Say Whatever: Yes We Did! My Mood:  Points: 663 Registration date: 2008-04-01
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Nica

 Number of posts: 1026 Age: 51 Location: Nashville Say Whatever: Yes We Did! My Mood:  Points: 663 Registration date: 2008-04-01
 | Subject: Once Upon A Time Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:51 am | |
| Once Upon A Time MHKnuckles
Once upon an antebellum time a new nation God chose to create, from a remnant of Africa’s Diaspora that he’d liberate then repatriate.
A noble conception though bitter-sweet in reflection; the indigenous population’s assimilation of a kindred yet foreign infiltration.
Still…with blessings this “Land of Liberty” was crowned. Infrastructure grew sound, missionaries did abound, and for a hundred years sweet peace could be found.
Yet amidst this blessed prosperity, the heart’s of native sons grew explosively fraught with the inequitable disparity between those who had and those who had not.
Blinded by greed...the powers that be did callous, self-serving, unscrupulous things. The disenfranchised voice they foolishly ignored as it wailed of injustices abhorred.
Contracts for unspeakable sacrifices became merely one of many infamous devices for securing ever so wickedly, money, power and perpetual sovereignty.
But the ill-fated straw that broke the camel’s back fell when the price of rice inflated to thirty bucks a sack. Bush-man and market-woman took to the street demanding to know how their families they’d feed.
Instead of answers, what the masses would receive was a blood-splattered foretaste, no man would perceive, as the hailing of an accursed and shameful decimation of what was intended to be a peaceful and noble nation.
Leader after leader fell by the hand of the sword. War after diamond fueled war came to no peaceable accord. The very core of the republic’s foundation was tumultuously shaken. Speculation flew that in divine retribution the people had been forsaken.
Though noted for exacting wrath upon the rebellious the Almighty is renowned for and equally zealous in renewing his grace as surely as the dawn. Thus, his redemptive purposes he did spawn.
With the last despot having been smote, the beleaguered citizens emerged to cast their vote for the daughter of the soil dubbed, “ Iron Lady”… exemplifying what the love of liberty can triumphantly achieve. |
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McNeal

 Number of posts: 138 Age: 32 Location: Monrovia, Liberia Say Whatever: The opposing wind, like a kite, will take me higher My Mood:  Points: 15 Registration date: 2008-05-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:15 am | |
| | Nica wrote: | Once Upon A Time MHKnuckles
Once upon an antebellum time a new nation God chose to create, from a remnant of Africa’s Diaspora that he’d liberate then repatriate.
A noble conception though bitter-sweet in reflection; the indigenous population’s assimilation of a kindred yet foreign infiltration.
Still…with blessings this “Land of Liberty” was crowned. Infrastructure grew sound, missionaries did abound, and for a hundred years sweet peace could be found.
Yet amidst this blessed prosperity, the heart’s of native sons grew explosively fraught with the inequitable disparity between those who had and those who had not.
Blinded by greed...the powers that be did callous, self-serving, unscrupulous things. The disenfranchised voice they foolishly ignored as it wailed of injustices abhorred.
Contracts for unspeakable sacrifices became merely one of many infamous devices for securing ever so wickedly, money, power and perpetual sovereignty.
But the ill-fated straw that broke the camel’s back fell when the price of rice inflated to thirty bucks a sack. Bush-man and market-woman took to the street demanding to know how their families they’d feed.
Instead of answers, what the masses would receive was a blood-splattered foretaste, no man would perceive, as the hailing of an accursed and shameful decimation of what was intended to be a peaceful and noble nation.
Leader after leader fell by the hand of the sword. War after diamond fueled war came to no peaceable accord. The very core of the republic’s foundation was tumultuously shaken. Speculation flew that in divine retribution the people had been forsaken.
Though noted for exacting wrath upon the rebellious the Almighty is renowned for and equally zealous in renewing his grace as surely as the dawn. Thus, his redemptive purposes he did spawn.
With the last despot having been smote, the beleaguered citizens emerged to cast their vote for the daughter of the soil dubbed, “ Iron Lady”… exemplifying what the love of liberty can triumphantly achieve. |
Where have you been keeping all these exquisite versifies?
Dr. Amos Sawyer said something about changing something in that: "The Love of Liberty Unites Us Here"... i love it.
you still my big sister in progress |
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Nica

 Number of posts: 1026 Age: 51 Location: Nashville Say Whatever: Yes We Did! My Mood:  Points: 663 Registration date: 2008-04-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:18 am | |
| I think his idea is great. The love of liberty did brings us here...but not all of us. Some of us wa already here. It is time for a change that truly reflects the entirety of the people. |
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McNeal

 Number of posts: 138 Age: 32 Location: Monrovia, Liberia Say Whatever: The opposing wind, like a kite, will take me higher My Mood:  Points: 15 Registration date: 2008-05-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:13 pm | |
| you know, it's late (4:02am)...just came from a party and still not wanting to sleep. I am not sure I will be around when the world is awake by then...lets see if he villagers would be in concordance with the uniting of us by the love of liberty. You could chair that Nica... I will join when my state of katzenjammer is no more. |
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Nica

 Number of posts: 1026 Age: 51 Location: Nashville Say Whatever: Yes We Did! My Mood:  Points: 663 Registration date: 2008-04-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:16 pm | |
| | McNeal wrote: | | you know, it's late (4:02am)...just came from a party and still not wanting to sleep. I am not sure I will be around when the world is awake by then...lets see if he villagers would be in concordance with the uniting of us by the love of liberty. You could chair that Nica... I will join when my state of katzenjammer is no more. |
Good Nite or morning I should say. My sef checking out na. Heading for church in the morning. I am sure the Village will be buzzing by Monday . |
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McNeal

 Number of posts: 138 Age: 32 Location: Monrovia, Liberia Say Whatever: The opposing wind, like a kite, will take me higher My Mood:  Points: 15 Registration date: 2008-05-01
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:23 pm | |
| ok then, peace, cheese, love, and chicken grease |
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Geyla Queen Admin

 Number of posts: 6434 Age: 34 Location: Atlanta, GA Say Whatever: I'm still holding on. My Mood:  Points: 4259 Registration date: 2008-03-28
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Geyla Queen Admin

 Number of posts: 6434 Age: 34 Location: Atlanta, GA Say Whatever: I'm still holding on. My Mood:  Points: 4259 Registration date: 2008-03-28
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candygirl Admin

 Number of posts: 5911 Location: Monrovia, Liberia Say Whatever: Laughter is the best medicine My Mood:  Points: 2226 Registration date: 2008-03-31
 | Subject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:00 pm | |
| | McNeal wrote: | I wrestle against myself
I tried turning away from myself But saw me looking at myself I tried taking away the old stuffs off my shelf But knew it was a wrestle against myself
How could I remove my ancient sleeve, And put me on a new amour of serenity? How could I change when I don’t even believe? And then wrestle against my own integrity?
I cried out aloud from within Only to put all that I feel out Looking unto a future so thin I still hope to wrestle me out
Wrestle against my failures, Wrestle against my ado, Wrestle against my future, I verge to wrestle against my ego
McNeal 1998/99 |
i love this one Mcneal. really nice.. expressive  _________________ For how can love attain true appreciation if it has never weathered tribulation? ~MHK
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