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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 4:22 am

My old pops was a missionary in liberia for more than 25 yers. He is 72 now and retired but stilll active there and is there at least once every year for UMC Annual Conference. I wrote this poem with him in heart. I never appreciated that missionary word when I wa small geh. It always had negative connotations. But I came to understand what it really means by living it and experiencing it from different perspectives. This is my perspective.

The Missionary’s Position
Monica Horton-Knuckles

The missionary’s position is peculiar in deed
devotedly hovering over the beloved souls,
for which salvation is deemed in need.

Methodical is the leverage that penetrates deep
within the indigenous core to uproot
and eradicate divergent ancestral beliefs.

For such might hinder the soul’s edification
and ultimately forestall its
divinely socio-economic elevation.

Precarious is the balance of the mindset of Christ
in fulfilling the intended mission without
the essence of the soul being sacrificed.

Inevitable is the germination of seeds of liberation.
Yet caution and clarification must be exercised
as said same seeds often birth tumult in a nation.

For there is no more heartrending nor ambiguous a position
than that of the lover of souls…forced to leave the beloved behind
in the precautionary commission of evacuating a mission.
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:15 am

Lemme come post my unna poem I wrote waaayy back in 1995
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:29 am

OUR LOVE

Our love is unique
It's not strong, it's not weak

When we first met
Nothing was really said
We just looked at each other
With a continuous stare........

Our love took us by surprise
You can't deny feeling the vibes
Our love is different
Sometimes we're hesitant
Often times we're resistant
Our love is bittersweet
Which makes my heart skip a beat
Our love is tragic
It could use some magic

What will become of our love?
It's losing its spark
But even if it enters the dark
There's one thing that'll always be true
And that is "Je t'aime" which means

I LOVE YOU!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:05 am

Nica wrote:
McNeal wrote:
I wrestle against myself


I tried turning away from myself
But saw me looking at myself
I tried taking away the old stuffs off my shelf
But knew it was a wrestle against myself

How could I remove my ancient sleeve,
And put me on a new amour of serenity
?
How could I change when I don’t even believe?
And then wrestle against my own integrity?

I cried out aloud from within
Only to put all that I feel out
Looking unto a future so thin
I still hope to wrestle me out

Wrestle against my failures,
Wrestle against my ado,
Wrestle against my future,
I verge to wrestle against my ego

McNeal 1998/99


Quite poingant and apropos is your intimate peep at a humanly commom battle, to put the self or me to death...to wrestle it out. Scripture says we are to...put away the former and be of a renewed mind. It is in turning away that we truly find ourselves looking at ourselves.

But if we are not wrestling the things we find, the failures, the egos, the flesh.. then we are in a complacent place, a place of no growth.

th_cool
You alright my chile.
My son in Monrovia Oh! lol! (you old enough to remember da one sef?)


Michel Dallaire was the first one to make me face myself, now you are the second to read my head letters by punctuation.

I hope I am improving.... I do admire your work and it had me spell bound.

You ma big sister in progress th_mrgreen
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:13 am

Honing the craft, the techniques of writing is something we can all learn. It is a growth process. But a masterful delivery of content that has the ablitity to move, to incite, to engender empathy...that is a gift... one I believe you possess. You are a diamond in the rough.
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:18 am

Sugar wrote:
OUR LOVE

Our love is unique
It's not strong, it's not weak

When we first met
Nothing was really said
We just looked at each other
With a continuous stare........

Our love took us by surprise
You can't deny feeling the vibes
Our love is different
Sometimes we're hesitant
Often times we're resistant
Our love is bittersweet
Which makes my heart skip a beat
Our love is tragic
It could use some magic

What will become of our love?
It's losing its spark
But even if it enters the dark
There's one thing that'll always be true
And that is "Je t'aime" which means

I LOVE YOU!!!!



Alright na Sugar.
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PostSubject: Once Upon A Time   Sun Aug 31, 2008 7:51 am

Once Upon A Time
MHKnuckles

Once upon an antebellum time
a new nation God chose to create,
from a remnant of Africa’s Diaspora
that he’d liberate then repatriate.

A noble conception
though bitter-sweet in reflection;
the indigenous population’s assimilation
of a kindred yet foreign infiltration.

Still…with blessings this “Land of Liberty” was crowned.
Infrastructure grew sound,
missionaries did abound,
and for a hundred years sweet peace could be found.

Yet amidst this blessed prosperity,
the heart’s of native sons grew explosively fraught
with the inequitable disparity between
those who had and those who had not.

Blinded by greed...the powers that be
did callous, self-serving, unscrupulous things.
The disenfranchised voice they foolishly ignored
as it wailed of injustices abhorred.

Contracts for unspeakable sacrifices
became merely one of many infamous devices
for securing ever so wickedly,
money, power and perpetual sovereignty.

But the ill-fated straw that broke the camel’s back
fell when the price of rice inflated to thirty bucks a sack.
Bush-man and market-woman took to the street
demanding to know how their families they’d feed.

Instead of answers, what the masses would receive
was a blood-splattered foretaste, no man would perceive,
as the hailing of an accursed and shameful decimation
of what was intended to be a peaceful and noble nation.

Leader after leader fell by the hand of the sword.
War after diamond fueled war came to no peaceable accord.
The very core of the republic’s foundation was tumultuously shaken.
Speculation flew that in divine retribution the people had been forsaken.

Though noted for exacting wrath upon the rebellious
the Almighty is renowned for and equally zealous
in renewing his grace as surely as the dawn.
Thus, his redemptive purposes he did spawn.

With the last despot having been smote,
the beleaguered citizens emerged to cast their vote
for the daughter of the soil dubbed, “ Iron Lady”…
exemplifying what the love of liberty can triumphantly achieve.
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:15 am

Nica wrote:
Once Upon A Time
MHKnuckles

Once upon an antebellum time
a new nation God chose to create,
from a remnant of Africa’s Diaspora
that he’d liberate then repatriate.

A noble conception
though bitter-sweet in reflection;
the indigenous population’s assimilation
of a kindred yet foreign infiltration.

Still…with blessings this “Land of Liberty” was crowned.
Infrastructure grew sound,
missionaries did abound,
and for a hundred years sweet peace could be found.

Yet amidst this blessed prosperity,
the heart’s of native sons grew explosively fraught
with the inequitable disparity between
those who had and those who had not.

Blinded by greed...the powers that be
did callous, self-serving, unscrupulous things.
The disenfranchised voice they foolishly ignored
as it wailed of injustices abhorred.

Contracts for unspeakable sacrifices
became merely one of many infamous devices
for securing ever so wickedly,
money, power and perpetual sovereignty.

But the ill-fated straw that broke the camel’s back
fell when the price of rice inflated to thirty bucks a sack.
Bush-man and market-woman took to the street
demanding to know how their families they’d feed.

Instead of answers, what the masses would receive
was a blood-splattered foretaste, no man would perceive,
as the hailing of an accursed and shameful decimation
of what was intended to be a peaceful and noble nation.

Leader after leader fell by the hand of the sword.
War after diamond fueled war came to no peaceable accord.
The very core of the republic’s foundation was tumultuously shaken.
Speculation flew that in divine retribution the people had been forsaken.

Though noted for exacting wrath upon the rebellious
the Almighty is renowned for and equally zealous
in renewing his grace as surely as the dawn.
Thus, his redemptive purposes he did spawn.

With the last despot having been smote,
the beleaguered citizens emerged to cast their vote
for the daughter of the soil dubbed, “ Iron Lady”…
exemplifying what the love of liberty can triumphantly achieve.


Where have you been keeping all these exquisite versifies?

Dr. Amos Sawyer said something about changing something in that: "The Love of Liberty Unites Us Here"... i love it.

you still my big sister in progress
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 11:18 am

I think his idea is great. The love of liberty did brings us here...but not all of us. Some of us wa already here. It is time for a change that truly reflects the entirety of the people.
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:13 pm

you know, it's late (4:02am)...just came from a party and still not wanting to sleep. I am not sure I will be around when the world is awake by then...lets see if he villagers would be in concordance with the uniting of us by the love of liberty. You could chair that Nica... I will join when my state of katzenjammer is no more.
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:16 pm

McNeal wrote:
you know, it's late (4:02am)...just came from a party and still not wanting to sleep. I am not sure I will be around when the world is awake by then...lets see if he villagers would be in concordance with the uniting of us by the love of liberty. You could chair that Nica... I will join when my state of katzenjammer is no more.



Good Nite or morning I should say. My sef checking out na. Heading for church in the morning. I am sure the Village will be buzzing by Monday .
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:23 pm

ok then, peace, cheese, love, and chicken grease
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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:59 am

Sugar wrote:
OUR LOVE

Our love is unique
It's not strong, it's not weak

When we first met
Nothing was really said
We just looked at each other
With a continuous stare........

Our love took us by surprise
You can't deny feeling the vibes
Our love is different
Sometimes we're hesitant
Often times we're resistant
Our love is bittersweet
Which makes my heart skip a beat
Our love is tragic
It could use some magic

What will become of our love?
It's losing its spark
But even if it enters the dark
There's one thing that'll always be true
And that is "Je t'aime" which means

I LOVE YOU!!!!

I remember this poem oh, you just brought back some memories lol! , those were the good old days th_mrgreen.

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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:02 am

McNeal wrote:
(A visit by the rushing waters)

Sweeping through the leafy woods
Surrounded by singing birds and lively herbs
Without a sense of birth
I realized myself on the bank of the rushing waters

Unlike the other side
Things were vivid, as I stood not firmly
But I refused to listen to the rushing waters
Thou, which seemed to be telling me many things

As I watched in silence
Listening to her many voices
I knew that I wasn’t the first person
And knew I very well not to be her last visitor

She told me many phenomenons of her beauty
She told me how dry leaves smiled away
But into prosperity
Finding pleasure with the morning breeze
And the oxygen of Mother Nature on her silky soft jelly skin
As she blew lovely kisses of smiles to the rising sun

But I forgot to remember all that she was saying
Wasn’t I also told of some of these dry leaves?
Those which ran into stunting riverbank rocks
And leaving no trace of their existence
Neither being remembered by the depth of her beauty
But being relinquished into the anguish of many that vanquished?

She told me in another mellow voice
How lovely dragonflies were murdered in her astounding beauty
And why fresh plants didn’t flow till the end of her beauty
In another voice I heard her say, but this time very horrifically
How the sun was at times hunting her beauty -
This which left many of her beloved into unending calamities of grief.

As I looked into her glittering wet blue eyes
I knew that she was telling me truths of many things
Those which were very hard to understand
I understood everything; only to forget
Yet I felt that she was talking directly, but to me
I then looked over my mounted shoulder in pretense
And saw many others exactly like me
It was then that I realized that I wasn’t me
But just a withering leaf
About to go on its own
Far away from its mother – tree

And now into the world of the rushing waters
The waters of rushing creatures
The waters many like me would be afraid of
By knowing that which she had told me – I told myself
I could reach the end of her beauty;
Without knocking ‘gainst the rocks of the river banks
Without drowning into the depth of her chilly beauty
But flowing upon her beautiful silky skin
I then knew that my visit to the rushing waters
Was not in vain
But for a purpose


brovo brovo brovo

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PostSubject: Re: THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts   Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:00 pm

McNeal wrote:
I wrestle against myself


I tried turning away from myself
But saw me looking at myself
I tried taking away the old stuffs off my shelf
But knew it was a wrestle against myself

How could I remove my ancient sleeve,
And put me on a new amour of serenity?
How could I change when I don’t even believe?
And then wrestle against my own integrity?

I cried out aloud from within
Only to put all that I feel out
Looking unto a future so thin
I still hope to wrestle me out

Wrestle against my failures,
Wrestle against my ado,
Wrestle against my future,
I verge to wrestle against my ego

McNeal 1998/99

i love this one Mcneal. really nice.. expressive smile_approve

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