THE POET'S CORNER--YOUR "ORIGINAL" WORKS ONLY...Share your thoughts

**Nica**

candygirl wrote:

sommor us aint knwo how to write poetry oh.... your makin us jealous..
\but i am enjoying your though.. keep it coming...

For true...wha kinna bluffing business dat. But I enjoyng him too.

**candygirl**

Nica wrote:

candygirl wrote:

sommor us aint knwo how to write poetry oh.... your makin us jealous..
\but i am enjoying your though.. keep it coming...

For true...wha kinna bluffing business dat. But I enjoyng him too.

HAHA.. PEKIN SHOWNG US HE GOT RAP.. I COMING START WRITING MY OWN TOO .. WHAT HAPPEN NAH.. I WANT BE EXPRESSIVE LIKE YOUR.

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

**candygirl** · Subject: A new mom Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:56 pm

how can one describe the feeling that overcomes you at that moment?
the moment you are handed that lil bundle....?

love
fear
anxiety
love
wonder

a lil bundle,
wrapped
pink nose
pinched eyes
pursed lips

mine?
what do i do?
what if he cries?
wha if he wont eat?
mine?

i am a new mom
love at first sight
indescribable love
mothers love

i am a new mom

~Candy

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

**Edina** · Number of posts: 584 My Mood: Points: 121 Registration date: 2008-04-09

New mom --- I like.

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BOOKER T. WASHINGTON -- "One cannot hold another down in the ditch without staying down in the ditch with him."

**candygirl**

Nica wrote:

Blink
MHK

In the blink of an eye
a world can change.
In the blink of an eye
it’s oh so strange.

What we thought to be real
can suddenly disappear.
What we thought was so confusing
suddenly becomes clear.

So live your life each and every day
as if there were no tomorrow.
Use laughter as a weapon
to drive away someone’s sorrow.

Make sure that the ones you love
know exactly how you feel.
Do all of these things quickly
because time makes no deals.
And the blink of an eye
leaves little time for goodbye.

very very nice Nica.. i like

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

**candygirl**

Edina wrote:

New mom --- I like.

morning Lady E

you like? hmm.. sommor us dont know how to write poetry oh... we just trying our hands... lol!

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

**Geyla Queen**

candygirl wrote:

how can one describe the feeling that overcomes you at that moment?
the moment you are handed that lil bundle....?

love
fear
anxiety
love
wonder

a lil bundle,
wrapped
pink nose
pinched eyes
pursed lips

mine?
what do i do?
what if he cries?
wha if he wont eat?
mine?

i am a new mom
love at first sight
indescribable love
mothers love

i am a new mom

~Candy

Awww, you did well th_icon_clap

I coming write my own too, your just wait smile_approve

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The More I Know....The More I Know I Need To Know"

**candygirl**

hmmm.. my mouth say i writin peotry you girl.. i coming post one other one i wrote

_________________
For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

**candygirl**

working mom
loving mom
busy mom
tired mom

always balancing
always juggling
always catching up

pacifying,
cajoling
bribing

to eat your cake and have it
is that such a bad thing?
hard thing?
impossible thing?

balancing family
demanding husband
whinnning child
complaining family "we dont see you"
i want my "Me" time
quiet time
pondering time

i want the nine yards
family
career
good rep

can i eat my cake and have it?
i want it
but
i am a working mom
working wife
busy daughter

can i eat my cake and still have it?
Yes, i can.

~Candy

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

HB*** · Number of posts: 262 My Mood: Points: 1 Registration date: 2008-04-02

....there you go...you just have to bring the feeing...that's a really good start...

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If the townspeople are happy, look for the chief.--Lib Proverb

**candygirl**

HB*** wrote:

....there you go...you just have to bring the feeing...that's a really good start...

hmm.. smor smor.. hahahaha

_________________
For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

**Nica**

candygirl wrote:

how can one describe the feeling that overcomes you at that moment?
the moment you are handed that lil bundle....?

love
fear
anxiety
love
wonder

a lil bundle,
wrapped
pink nose
pinched eyes
pursed lips

mine?
what do i do?
what if he cries?
wha if he wont eat?
mine?

i am a new mom
love at first sight
indescribable love
mothers love

i am a new mom

~Candy

Beautiful expression Candy!!!!!!!!!!!!!

**Nica** · Last edited by Nica on Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:39 pm; edited 1 time in total

candygirl wrote:

working mom
loving mom
busy mom
tired mom

always balancing
always juggling
always catching up

pacifying,
cajoling
bribing

to eat your cake and have it
is that such a bad thing?
hard thing?
impossible thing?

balancing family
demanding husband
whinnning child
complaining family "we dont see you"
i want my "Me" time
quiet time
pondering time

i want the nine yards
family
career
good rep

can i eat my cake and have it?
i want it
but
i am a working mom
working wife
busy daughter

can i eat my cake and still have it?
Yes, i can.

~Candy

Aye yah. Da wha I talking bout. You na get hooked. Yes you can.

**candygirl**

i learnign small small.. that your the one inspired me.. hehehehe

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For how can love attain true appreciation
if it has never weathered tribulation?
~MHK

**Geyla Queen**

<---I still thinking

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The More I Know....The More I Know I Need To Know"