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PostSubject: A poem from my notebook   Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:28 pm
Maybe I would love critiques for this one. It's very old too:


I Wrestle Against Myself

I tried turning away from myself
But saw me looking at myself
I tried taking away the old stuffs off my shelf
But knew it was a wrestle against myself

How could I remove my ancient sleeve
And put me on a new amour of serenity?
How could I change when I don’t even believe
And then wrestle against my own integrity?

I cried out aloud from within
Only to put all that I feel out
Looking unto a future so thin
I still hope to wrestle me out

Wrestle against my failures,
Wrestle against my ado,
Wrestle against my future, I verge to wrestle against my ego-McNeal (1999)
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PostSubject: Re: A poem from my notebook   Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:35 pm
th_icon_clap nice...we have another poet in dey village
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PostSubject: Re: A poem from my notebook   Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:50 pm
Wow mcNeal.. really nice.. i love it.
i give it 4 stars ystar ystar ystar ystar

this was written a few years back.. do you still feel that way...? if you were speaking of yourself, that is
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PostSubject: Re: A poem from my notebook   Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:18 am
To be honest, it was a though time for me and those moments of perturbation, many thoughts run thru' your mind...but at the moment... I think the wrestle is done, and I am won..!

But my anticipation was more of the negative, neanmoins, it's ok.

I will be doing more posting as I get more reviews... I have more of them.
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PostSubject: Re: A poem from my notebook   Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:03 am
CG McNeal dat my boy...u know nah.. so so nice people I can roll with.
Welcome McNeal
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PostSubject: Re: A poem from my notebook   Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:27 am
RossWorld wrote:
CG McNeal dat my boy...u know nah.. so so nice people I can roll with.
Welcome McNeal


yeah the poem is well written.. but Ross you gotta claim ownership on this one too ehn..? th_mrgreen
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PostSubject: Re: A poem from my notebook   Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:08 pm
But if you na identify with good thing then who you be na?
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